**beats lj**
Mar. 7th, 2010 07:58 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
necia_phoenixso last night I finished BP ch 1 edit and I THOUGHT I posted about it.
But it seams the post got eaten.
I did some trimming. Ch1 1 started with 2985 words and is 2968 words. I added some I took away... I hope it improved it. Trying to get into Zander's head again. I always enjoy writing/working on his stories.
Now on to ch 2.
But it seams the post got eaten.
I did some trimming. Ch1 1 started with 2985 words and is 2968 words. I added some I took away... I hope it improved it. Trying to get into Zander's head again. I always enjoy writing/working on his stories.
Now on to ch 2.
