gah

Feb. 6th, 2011 01:03 am
necia_phoenix: (inspiration)
well now. I wrote a few scenes with Talia today. Not as much writing as RL needed me more.

I am beat, ready to sleep. I found myself writing the last couple of paragraphs with my eyes closed. To my amazement, I didn't have any typos... well that I can see.


I seem to be doing a lot of exploring. Re-examining the story, the characters. I am certain that Bastard Prince is really two books. I do believe I have said it before.

The first half is the hell Zander went through. The second half is almost a redemption of sorts.

I did 2032 words tonight including a sex scene which... I'll look it over in a few weeks just to make sure everything **ahem** fits nicely. :P If you know what I mean.

53920 / 160000
(33.7%)


Snippity:
"We can't let the Guild fly apart just yet." Talia said.

"How are we going to head off something like this?" Kyri gripped her arm. "You aren't ruthless enough to take on the Guild."

"No. I'm not. But the Lordkiller is."



Goodnight LJ & FB.

gah

Feb. 6th, 2011 01:03 am
necia_phoenix: (inspiration)
well now. I wrote a few scenes with Talia today. Not as much writing as RL needed me more.

I am beat, ready to sleep. I found myself writing the last couple of paragraphs with my eyes closed. To my amazement, I didn't have any typos... well that I can see.


I seem to be doing a lot of exploring. Re-examining the story, the characters. I am certain that Bastard Prince is really two books. I do believe I have said it before.

The first half is the hell Zander went through. The second half is almost a redemption of sorts.

I did 2032 words tonight including a sex scene which... I'll look it over in a few weeks just to make sure everything **ahem** fits nicely. :P If you know what I mean.

53920 / 160000
(33.7%)


Snippity:
"We can't let the Guild fly apart just yet." Talia said.

"How are we going to head off something like this?" Kyri gripped her arm. "You aren't ruthless enough to take on the Guild."

"No. I'm not. But the Lordkiller is."



Goodnight LJ & FB.

Oh my!

Feb. 5th, 2011 02:35 am
necia_phoenix: (tender)
Well then...

I have passed 50k on Bastard Prince. This new writing style is really helping me I think.

I am having fun at least :P.

 
51,888 / 150,000
(34.6%)



and on top of this I have a couple darlings. One might sound a bit dorky but I liked it:

Talia frowned. She couldn't force him to let her help. But he was refusing to listen to the long term effects of what Sorsha did. What was it Merdoc told her? Get his attention? How? She took a deep breath, moving around to his side of the table took his head in her hands. When he looked up she straddled his legs and kissed him. It was supposed to be a quick kiss, just enough to startle him. When she finally pulled away she struggled to breathe. That hadn't gone quite as planned but he was certainly looking at her. A mixture of shock, desire written on his face.

"Do I have your attention?" She asked.

"My complete attention." He sounded as breathless as she felt. He dropped his hand, but didn't look away. His arm still around her waist.

Score for me. She thought smugly.


hehehe I thought it was funny.

then there is this which is the last line I wrote tonight:

"Our mother is a dark immortal, Talia. Now what do we do?"


goodnight peeps. I hope you all rest well.

edited because I posted instead of previewed. oops.

Oh my!

Feb. 5th, 2011 02:35 am
necia_phoenix: (tender)
Well then...

I have passed 50k on Bastard Prince. This new writing style is really helping me I think.

I am having fun at least :P.

 
51,888 / 150,000
(34.6%)



and on top of this I have a couple darlings. One might sound a bit dorky but I liked it:

Talia frowned. She couldn't force him to let her help. But he was refusing to listen to the long term effects of what Sorsha did. What was it Merdoc told her? Get his attention? How? She took a deep breath, moving around to his side of the table took his head in her hands. When he looked up she straddled his legs and kissed him. It was supposed to be a quick kiss, just enough to startle him. When she finally pulled away she struggled to breathe. That hadn't gone quite as planned but he was certainly looking at her. A mixture of shock, desire written on his face.

"Do I have your attention?" She asked.

"My complete attention." He sounded as breathless as she felt. He dropped his hand, but didn't look away. His arm still around her waist.

Score for me. She thought smugly.


hehehe I thought it was funny.

then there is this which is the last line I wrote tonight:

"Our mother is a dark immortal, Talia. Now what do we do?"


goodnight peeps. I hope you all rest well.

edited because I posted instead of previewed. oops.

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