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necia_phoenixWell then...
I have passed 50k on Bastard Prince. This new writing style is really helping me I think.
I am having fun at least :P.
and on top of this I have a couple darlings. One might sound a bit dorky but I liked it:
Talia frowned. She couldn't force him to let her help. But he was refusing to listen to the long term effects of what Sorsha did. What was it Merdoc told her? Get his attention? How? She took a deep breath, moving around to his side of the table took his head in her hands. When he looked up she straddled his legs and kissed him. It was supposed to be a quick kiss, just enough to startle him. When she finally pulled away she struggled to breathe. That hadn't gone quite as planned but he was certainly looking at her. A mixture of shock, desire written on his face.
"Do I have your attention?" She asked.
"My complete attention." He sounded as breathless as she felt. He dropped his hand, but didn't look away. His arm still around her waist.
Score for me. She thought smugly.
hehehe I thought it was funny.
then there is this which is the last line I wrote tonight:
"Our mother is a dark immortal, Talia. Now what do we do?"
goodnight peeps. I hope you all rest well.
edited because I posted instead of previewed. oops.
I have passed 50k on Bastard Prince. This new writing style is really helping me I think.
I am having fun at least :P.
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51,888 / 150,000 (34.6%) |
and on top of this I have a couple darlings. One might sound a bit dorky but I liked it:
Talia frowned. She couldn't force him to let her help. But he was refusing to listen to the long term effects of what Sorsha did. What was it Merdoc told her? Get his attention? How? She took a deep breath, moving around to his side of the table took his head in her hands. When he looked up she straddled his legs and kissed him. It was supposed to be a quick kiss, just enough to startle him. When she finally pulled away she struggled to breathe. That hadn't gone quite as planned but he was certainly looking at her. A mixture of shock, desire written on his face.
"Do I have your attention?" She asked.
"My complete attention." He sounded as breathless as she felt. He dropped his hand, but didn't look away. His arm still around her waist.
Score for me. She thought smugly.
hehehe I thought it was funny.
then there is this which is the last line I wrote tonight:
"Our mother is a dark immortal, Talia. Now what do we do?"
goodnight peeps. I hope you all rest well.
edited because I posted instead of previewed. oops.
