Snip for a chat discussion on dialogue.
Dec. 3rd, 2009 12:32 pmFeel free to comment. This has not been edited.
It is rough and unedited and more than likely will NEVER make it to the final draft. I was exploring the way these two characters interact.
Valen is a swordsman and is of a race called Rahaun, loosely based on elves.
Trisha is a hume (a human with a very distant Rahaun ancestor)
( cut to spare the flist )
**hands out cloth to wipe blood from eyes
It is rough and unedited and more than likely will NEVER make it to the final draft. I was exploring the way these two characters interact.
Valen is a swordsman and is of a race called Rahaun, loosely based on elves.
Trisha is a hume (a human with a very distant Rahaun ancestor)
( cut to spare the flist )
**hands out cloth to wipe blood from eyes