**tapps mic** is this thing on?

I have been trying to get more active in RL which means my computer stays firmly shut off until the kids are in bed. Which means I don't hit all the sites I want to before I go to sleep.

I converted several of my 1st draft ms's to .epub and loaded them onto my nook so I could read over and do edits. I think it will help me to see the work in a faux-pubbed format. Somehow it is very recharging. SO I blew a couple hours going over Elemental Truth* and Immortality Unveiled.

Immortality Unveiled is, hands down, one of my personal favorites. I love the story and I love the characters and it need oh so much work.... But reading it like that I can **see** what is wrong and I have an idea of how to fix it.

As for Elemental Truth I can see that becoming a favorite read also.

That said, I need to pull together meters but it may be a bit before I get to that. I am trying to catch up and figure out what should be priority.

yanno what I mean?










*I don't think that will be the final title but I can't think of any other.