**beats lj**

so last night I finished BP ch 1 edit and I THOUGHT I posted about it.

But it seams the post got eaten.

I did some trimming. Ch1 1 started with 2985 words and is 2968 words. I added some I took away... I hope it improved it. Trying to get into Zander's head again. I always enjoy writing/working on his stories.

Now on to ch 2.

**beats lj**

so last night I finished BP ch 1 edit and I THOUGHT I posted about it.

But it seams the post got eaten.

I did some trimming. Ch1 1 started with 2985 words and is 2968 words. I added some I took away... I hope it improved it. Trying to get into Zander's head again. I always enjoy writing/working on his stories.

Now on to ch 2.